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Category Archives: Lesson 4
The key, Lesson 4 of Essentials of Fiction Writing, narrated by Louise Grammatico
The key, Lesson 4 of Essentials of Fiction Writing narrated by Louise Grammatico The house was situated in a quiet area with two floors of family houses with beautiful gardens. Grethen occupied a chamber on the second floor furnished with … Continue reading
Lesson 4: Showing and Telling( comments please)
Bella was crossing the apartment she can hardly wait to meet her new roommate. The door fully opened, and here it was the new roommate. Bella rushed to help her with the suitcases and other belongings, but suddenly stopped when … Continue reading
The Roommate
Sitting on the sofa, Eleanor gazed around her flat. She was satisfied with the home that she had made for herself. I hope Jess likes the flat too, she thought. The sound of a car drawing up outside took Eleanor’s … Continue reading
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Lesson 4 Telling and Showing – Ron
For lesson 4, I have added a sex scene to my previous story……. Frances and Shelley watched the boys on the climbing wall. One was hanging upside down ‘I could do that’, Frances said. ‘I wouldn’t mind meeting those boys’, Shelley … Continue reading
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Lesson 4 – Tilda
Charlotte brought her Ford Fiesta to a grinding halt, the exhaust pipe firing a protesting shot as she jerked to a stop in front of the house. The door groaned a deep complaint as she shoved it open and swung … Continue reading
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Lesson 4 10 minute assignment Telling and Showing
‘Ah you must be Alan. I’m Thomas. Welcome.’ He shook my hand. I bent down a little to look him in the face. He couldn’t have been much above 5 foot six, skinny with narrow shoulders. He was wearing a … Continue reading
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Could There Be More… Chapter 4
Nick turned as he closed the last case file he’d been working on that morning, “Josh are you ready to go get some lunch?” “What?” Josh was distractedly shuffling papers looking for something answered. “I asked if you were … Continue reading
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The Unexpected Roommate : Lesson 4
The Unexpected Roommate LESSON 4 I fidget with the key in the lock, but for some reason it won’t work. I take a deep breath and try again. Nope. That’s when I realize that the nob is slightly different and … Continue reading
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Lesson 4 – Two’s Company
As Jenna poured herself a freshly made cup of coffee, she heard the sound of a car pulling up outside. She walked over to the window, and waved enthusiastically as she was greeted by the smiling face of her new … Continue reading
Lesson 4: Freaky Roommate
It is my new day here at University of Ottawa. The head mistress of the dormitory informs me that my roommate would be arriving shortly. Since I am the first one to arrive I have chosen the bed beside the … Continue reading