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Category Archives: Lesson 2
Her weakness, Writing essential, lesson 2
Her weakness, Writing essential, lesson 2 At the early hours of the working day, was Imogine about to finish the preparation of the report as it was expected by her Hazel, the branch manager. Imogine was working on it one week … Continue reading
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I looked in the mirror and knew that I was ready for another fun night without stress and nervousness that I could run to the right person. The right person, Mister Perfect that kind of man didn’t exist at all. … Continue reading
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He’d been waiting five years to get on the police force. Taken the exam six times scoring high in the 90’s. He was already a fireman at a fire department right down the street from his house. He had been … Continue reading
Loyalty
As a voice whispered weakly from behind, “Hey, Will!” he stopped. Slowly turning round, he looked in disbelief at his brother. His hair was dishevelled, his face bruised. “I need your help-”. “What’s happened to you!” he asked, halting him … Continue reading
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Creating Characters that Feel Real – Ron
Creating Characters that feel Real – Ron Frances and Shelley watched the boys on the climbing wall. One was hanging upside down ‘I could do that’, Frances said. ‘I wouldn’t mind meeting those boys’, Shelley replied, ‘Look at that cute … Continue reading
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Lesson 2 – It is as you say
Marez leaned back into his chair as his father Lord Osel, seated at the head of the table to his right, rambled on about his son’s obligations to his family. For the past several weeks this had been his parents’ … Continue reading
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Lesson 2: Dana’s Day
“Alright everybody,” Miss Lund chirped on, “Your homework for tonight-.” A collective groan filtered through the classroom. “Oh I know, I know guys. Its really not that bad I promise.” A sudden loud bang rattled the closed door to Dana … Continue reading
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Lesson #2: Character Development, Version 2. FEEDBACK PLEASE!
This is (I hope) a better version of my previous post for this lesson. Feel free to comment. — William Hewitt circles the tip of his Beverley menthol cigarette around the inside of the ashtray and gives it three taps … Continue reading
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Lesson #2: Character Development. Feedback!!
For this lesson I’ve chosen one of the preset names: William Hewitt. He’s an old detective who has got quite a bit of fight left in him. But his physical strength is his main hindrance. Particularly his knee. The aim … Continue reading
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Lesson 2 – CONTAINED
It won’t be too long now until she arrives. I’m so excited, I can barely contain myself. But, I must control myself. When I get too excited, bad things happen. I look across the dirt floor to a skull on … Continue reading
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